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open source bible project: genesis 21:30-34
This project is explained here and here. Notes 31. Divide “Beersheba” into “Beer Sheba” as before. 32. Replace “into” with “to.” Related Posts:open source bible project: genesis 22:8-13open source bible project: genesis 22:3-7open source bible project: genesis 22:1-2Adam and the Enslavement of Humanity, Part 1Farewell, Logan
open source bible project: genesis 21:24-29
This project is explained here and here. Notes 25. Reverted “water well” (WEB) to “well of water” (ASV). “Well of water” may sound awkward, but “water well” sounds even more awkward. 27. Change the sentence “Those two made a covenant” into the end of the previous sentence, “. . . and the two made a [...]
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open source bible project: genesis 21:19-23
This project is explained here and here. Notes 19. Change “gave the boy drink” to “gave the boy some to drink.” 20. Change word order in the second sentence to make it readable. 21. Change “out of the land” to “from the land.” Related Posts:No Related Posts
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open source bible project: genesis 21:14-18
The rough draft below has been abandoned and is no longer maintained. All files involved in this project are consolidated and maintained here. Notes 14. Change “Beersheba” to “Beer Sheba.” 15. Change “spent” to “used up.” 16. Change “over against him” to “opposite him.” 17. Change “out of the sky” to “from the sky.” Change [...]
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open source bible project: genesis 21:8-13
This project is explained here and here. Notes 10. Remove comma after “son.” 11. Change “This thing” to “This matter.” 12. Change “seed” to “offspring” for consistency with Genesis 3:15 etc. Related Posts:No Related Posts
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open source bible project: genesis 21:1-7
This project is explained here and here. Notes 5. Remove commas around “Isaac.” Related Posts:No Related Posts
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open source bible project: genesis 20:17-18
This rough draft has not been maintained, proofread, or updated. Active work on this project is now consolidated here. Notes 17. Consolidate all the verse into one sentence to more clearly connect Abraham’s prayer with God’s healing of Abimelech. 18. Change “closed up tight” to “tightly closed.” Related Posts:No Related Posts
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open source bible project: genesis 20:11-16
This project is explained here and here. Notes 11. Change “for my wife’s sake” to “for my wife.” 12. Change “is indeed” to “really is.” 13. Change “shall show to me” to “will show me.” 15. Change “Dwell” to “live.” Related Posts:No Related Posts
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open source bible project: genesis 20:6-10
This rough draft is not maintained or kept up to date. It has been replaced by a more centralized version of the project here. Notes 6. Change “Therefore I didn’t” to “Therefore I did not.” Having such an elevated word as “Therefore” right next to “did not” gives the sentence an odd feeling. Related Posts:No [...]
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open source bible project: genesis 22:1-2